If I were a college admissions officer who is trying the find the perfect students to my college, I would consider some important points that a student in our college should have. In spite of academics, I will be looking forward to people who have leadership and can be good leaders at any moment. I would also want people who have additional talents, such as musical talents, performing talents, artistic talents, athletic talents, etc. Furthermore, I want a people with good hearts who like to help people and who did and will make contributions to the society. Most importantly, having an appropriate attitude is a key factor that I will look at to determine whether this person is qualified enough to be in the college. If an essay is all about how good he or she is, then the warning sign would be ringing. We don't want a person being arrogant and trying to show off all the time.
A perfect applicant should be able to show that he or she has versatility, quality of being a leader, and a good attitude. For instance, having long-term talents like playing piano and being in tennis team would be a good example of being versatile. Being class leader, joining student council, or club leader would show that the applicant has leadership. Moreover, I would like to see the applicant’s attitude is humble and is willing to learn more in the college. For facing the challenges, he or she should have the ability to handle.
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